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Write it the way you'd say it

Situation: Sam's rough price-rise letter is about to go to every shop customer.

Example conversation with a made-up company.

Can you tighten this up? It's going to all our shop customers. I want it to still sound like me, not like a corporate letter. Dear customer, I wanted to let you know about our prices going up. Our main supplier has put their prices up from 1 December so unfortunately we have no choice but to pass some of this on and our prices will be going up by 4% from 1 January. …
TigerTiger › write
Loaded skill: Copy Editing

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I kept your own phrases ("no choice", "not good news for anyone", "call me directly") so it still sounds like you.
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What I changed:

  • The news now comes first. Your old opening ("I wanted to let you know...") delayed it, and customers will be looking for the 4% and the date.
  • Split the one long sentence into short ones, so the 4% and 1 January don't get buried.
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That's better. Can you make the end a bit warmer? I don't want it to read like I'm hiding behind the reps. …

Good, I'll leave the number alone. Here's the whole letter with a warmer end. The change is that you now come first and the rep is the extra option, not the other way round.

Dear customer,

Our prices will go up by 4% from 1 January. Our main supplier put their prices up from 1 December, and we have no choice but to pass some of that on.

We've kept the rise as low as we can, and we've already absorbed some of the increase ourselves over the last two months. I know this isn't good news for anyone.

If you have any questions, please call me directly. I'm happy to talk it through. Your sales rep can help too.

We'll keep giving you the best service we can, and thank you for your business.

Kind regards,
Sam Carter
Northfield Supply

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If "I'm happy to talk it through" isn't how you'd say it, swap in your own words. It's the one line here I added rather than kept from your draft.

What changed: A shorter letter, with the news first, a warmer ending and Sam's own phrases kept. The AI also says which line it added, so he can swap it.

Try it: Sam typed "Can you tighten this up?" (skill: copy-editing, from the writing pack)